Comments of chapter undefined of Billion Recurve: Creators of the New World

• The quality of the work is super good for WN readers. The usage of excessive imagery might not be understandable to most people. I'd suggest to tone it down and have straight sentences. • The chapter begins on a slow pace, MC washing dishes and stuff. Then (swish) he is in some market to buy things and gets transmigrated without a proper warning or explanation. • We see the chores MC does (which imo) are unnecessary things. Author could've said them in a single paragraph rather than showing us an unnecessary description. • I totally understand that the washing dishes was just an aid to help with the display of the 'evolution theory' which I personally loved how effortlessly the author made us imagine and get awareness of what theme should we (as readers) expect ahead. • But the minor details of water rushing, soap on the cup (which is the initial focus, and would derive the scene next) was a good thing. But the later on emphasis and repetition of the same thing was unnecessary. • The later half of the chapter is synopsis description, which represents the details about MC. • However the synopsis is pretty much off, gives nothing about what the book is. Synopsis should've these points: 1) Who is MC? (noticable thing about him) 2) What is the theme of the book? 3) What is the aim of MC and the obstructions? • Lastly the readers of WN are familiar with some basics they've set for good reading experience. I'd suggest the usage of ("....") for dialogues. And ('....') for thoughts of MC, and lastly (_abcdef) or [abcdef] for system notifications. • Always remember first 3 chapters will decide whether the reader will stay up to next 10 chaps or not.