Comments of chapter undefined of My System: An Evolved Computer I Made With My Unique Ability—
could you please pay more attention to tense continuity, you keep jumping from past to present tense and back. Please please 🙏 just stick to one continuous tense it's such a plague to see this mistake in almost every single book on this site. I'm certain you know how tenses work so just put it all in past tense and do yourself and everyone else a favour.
I should have known I wouldn't like it because of the first few words of the synopsis. This first chapter cemented this belief. I am not bashing the author but this just isn't my cup of tea. Author maybe next time you should mention the works you are basing your novel off. I am no fan of MHA nor of hero based stories (they never get done properly ). The system seemed interesting but go ruined with this premise. Peace out.
