Comments of chapter undefined of REINCARTED ANOTHER WORLD CARD USER

summon blue eyes white dragon, dark magician, and gaia the fierce knight please

it has potential but i have to stop alot to understand what i read so it takes out alot of the fun. Dont give up and good luck.

it has a good concept but please work on the spelling and grammar

i cannot read this as it is written right now.

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This chap is the embodiment of the "He's a bit confused but he got the spirit" meme. Anyway, you got things to improve. But even so, don't give up and keep writing!

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

many mistake man rewrite this chapter

Advanced crystals should be greater than Intermediate crystals... From the least to the greatest goes as this Common, Intermediate, Advanced...

from the book it feels like yu-gi-oh

Good start so far, just wish for the improvement of the writing, like stop using too much bold letters for description it's already good with just the usual.... Also try using quotation marks for the dialogue it might be helpful for a much better reading experience

Thanks for the chap

thanks for the chapter

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If at all possible could you put this through grammarly once again just to touch up some areas?

Xp

anyone confused or is it just me

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