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Comments of chapter undefined of Heir of the otsutsuki

Ktheus
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Harém holds the author in something that in time he doesn't care, in this story the MC would be stuck with dead weight. To develop a good harem it is necessary to stay a lot in its members and its interactions.This basically kills a lot of stories because over time the author lose the spirit for writing, don't get me wrong it's possible to create a good harem but history has to ask for it. I have a saved post that could help with this decision: www.royalroad.com/forums/thread/22069?page=1#pid245781

Ktheus
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PS: my favorite colors are emerald green or ruby ​​red gradient q(sorry for my bad english, i'm not native and i spent all my effort on the reading part)

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Aether_Leviathan
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3 are good yugito please tho I normally read stories where she dies or smth it'd be cool seeing her get a happy ending

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KizaMoor
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Yes Harem. Hinata, Tsunade, Konan? Perfect!

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Trollface
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well, a harem is not a bad idea. here you still don't have a deep romantic line, so you can safely bring relationships with several women. as I understood the first two condidatki are Conan and Nii Yugito!? excellent choice. the third one I would probably take Hinata (unless of course Naruto will end up not with her). but it's not clear to me how you want to bring Naruto and Tsunade together (but to be honest, this is quite an interesting idea, I would say even very much, I imagine the distorted face of Jiraiya and Minato, Kushina poor thing would have fallen out in general) Sasuke and Karin are also an interesting couple, their children will definitely be very strong.

Matias_Varas
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Harén es bueno

Smiley_sx
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3 are good

MorningStar77
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Jiraya need to die

Sukuna_R
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I think it's better to get Karin, Hinata, Tsunade for the harem,, also add Mizukage Mei to the list? Kaguya? Tsunade 2, Samui?,, for Naruto let him get the Ashura chakra during the 4th war,, also take Sasuke's Rinnegan and Indra's chakra,, can he take Chakra? I forgot

Fuck_harem
Fuck_haremLv1Fuck_harem

No harem and no naruto + tsunade

Nine_awa
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Sin harem, sin naruto y tsunade y relación amorosa..... mientras este bien desarrollado no hay problema 😥😥😥

Danny_Butts
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Don't know if these questions are still up for deciding but if they are then. . . . Harem good possible members Hinata and Ino (I mean both ino and mc mess with the Soul so shrug) as for the third member i dunno maybe the girl he just kidnapped? Sasuke X Karin? Sure why not Naruto X Tsunade three words robbing the cradle favorite color obviously blue the best color (fight me)

Ouyang_XD
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No harem

AndMak
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Sasuke + Karin? -No, I would like to see such a transferred character as Karin in the main character's harem (I hope it's not too late at this point in the plot, and my ideal harem is Konan, Karin, and Hinata). Naruto + Tsunade? -Interesting idea, if Naruto eventually dies, she will have a pretty miserable fate. 12411 - 1.1 -12409,9 What if Naruto dies? -If the main character is evil, then it would be nice to take everything that should have been from Naruto and then kill him. What's your favorite color? -Red. Is a harem of three girls good or bad? -Three, an ideal middle ground between revealing the characters in the harem and giving them equal "screen time". What if Renjiro dont let Jiraiya die in hands of Pain? -If this leads to a deterioration in relations with Konan, then it is not worth it.

Aether_Leviathan
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I'd say yugito,kaguya and best girl konan

Nicko_Neko
Nicko_NekoLv4Nicko_Neko

No harem and Sasuke and Karin

IlluminatingRedSun
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No harem or bad fanfic

Sokar123_G
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Harem no

Emanuel_Mavares
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Hinata, Tsunade and Mei terumi, ino

5paghetti_5auce
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thanks for the chapter

Len_Stoff
Len_StoffLv1Len_Stoff

No harem no romance

Mad_cat_1725
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thank you for the chapter