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Comments of chapter undefined of Martial Arts System

Etiger789
Etiger789Lv15Etiger789

really a 15 year old looks like a big scary mouutin to the mc.

LohQiwan
LohQiwanLv2LohQiwan

he was 190cm my guy

Kido_TO
Kido_TOLv4Kido_TO

so it's one of those novels which honour reality/logic/slow development trend, which can explain why mc lost.

Rex_Lindsay
Rex_LindsayLv15Rex_Lindsay

Finally a novel where the mc isnt op from the start and actually has to build his body up to a level where he can use the techniques he knew in a previous life. He can get hurt and lose battles. I'm sorta tired of the invincible op mcs from the start novels. I like the progression of a mc to greatness. Keep up this type of writing

fuchiku
fuchikuLv11fuchiku

keep it up :)

system_evolver
system_evolverLv14system_evolver

This is not a complaint this is an observation. Ok we can all agree that they separated out all of the techniques so they could pad the length of the chapter it just filled up unnecessary space for no reason.

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Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thanks for the chap

Daemanuel
DaemanuelLv4Daemanuel

La mentalidad del MC no concuerda con su condición. Acabas de decir que es un hombre de 45 curtido en peleas a muerte. Entonces no tiene sentido que actúe como un niño que se pone triste al perder un duelo que era imposible ganar, da igual que tenga un sistema. El MC tiene que ser muy maduro, es una soga que te pusiste solo al cuello al escribir esta novela. Tienes que cambiar el MC y hacerlo mucho, MUCHO más maduro a partir de este capítulo. Calculador, con varios pasos por delante y no se salte pasos y con ilusiones de poder ganar contra alguien que le dobla o triplica en fuerza y velocidad. No entiendo siquiera como es posible realizar movimientos y golpes bien. Como dije antes las artes marciales se trata de memoria muscular y dureza como destreza, pero un niño que no ha entrenado en su vida(me da igual su vida anterior, eso no le afecta en esto). Una cosa es saber que tienes que poner la pierna así y golpear así y otra cosa es saberlo y poder hacerlo.

Sahurui
SahuruiLv3Sahurui

I'm not really complaining I'm just a tad bit mad, bad start and bad impression why would you lose to a kid even though you're an experienced old man inside, that just mean your taking hits fore free and your years of experience was in vain, he couldn't even judge his opponents level and fight just as impulsive as a youth. Welp I do get it that he wanted to know where his limits are but, why with that body. I mean come on why would this "experienced" veteran fight and lose pathetically? especially if he used to be an assassin, he should've already been dead with that eyes.

Luffy_Soares
Luffy_SoaresLv2Luffy_Soares

moooooreeeee please !!!!!!!

facholyn
facholynLv14facholyn

Gracias - Thanks

Matt_Hardesty
Matt_HardestyLv15Matt_Hardesty

ok so not 1 point was used in vitality... dumb what's good with bring a beast bit getting hurt super easy. come on mc think..

Siegfred
SiegfredLv10Siegfred

DaoistGebGw2
DaoistGebGw2Lv1DaoistGebGw2

Grammar needs work

K101_yafet
K101_yafetLv2K101_yafet

thanks for the chap

Tales_King
Tales_KingLv10Tales_King

Thanks

Nate_hunter
Nate_hunterLv2Nate_hunter

this system is balanced, slow growth, he would be only slightly better then a normal person, if he was a normal person, but his past experiences make this system stronger them it was intended

Saiful_Hidayah
Saiful_HidayahLv1Saiful_Hidayah

this is good, mc starts from the beginning and doesn't talk nonsense like always wins without losing though, novels where mc always wins are boring [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

Costela
CostelaLv1Costela

👍

Reaperash
ReaperashLv14Reaperash

Jesus stats adding to the word count lol

Sahin_Ahmed_5099
Sahin_Ahmed_5099Lv13Sahin_Ahmed_5099

Thanks for the chapter