Thunder_Dawn
Love the overall run of the story as well. The only thing that I would like to see more would be character growth for Marek outside of his Empire's citizens, friends, and loved ones. I don't really mind MC's with extreme personality types especially when the story is as good as yours, but too much of something is always bad, a little bit of balance wouldn't hurt. I just hope while doing so wouldn't destroy his overall character just for the personality growth. I'd rather have the current extreme one right now than destroy his character for the sake of the plot. Though that might soon get tiring or bland as well in the long run if he doesn't experience personality growth outside of his people. After all, an extreme kindness to his people and extreme apathy for those not considered his people is a monotonous personality type. --- With that done....THIS CHAPTER IS A BLAAAAAAAAAST for me. Never thought I would enjoy an entire chapter worth of descriptions. lol. I'm a daydreamer and just imagining what you've written here greatly pleases my mind. Love how you combined the Universal Rinngan's Susanoo with the Tenseigan. Though I think having 3 sets of weapons based on the personality of each face (meaning 4 for each face) would be better than almost a similar type of weapon(scimitar) for the whole Susanoo. Also, loved how it was foreshadowed by Whis that this isn't even close to his full extent yet. I would love to see that. After all, I can't really see him being strong than his already current state of using the Supreme Eyes of Naruto world on a Universal Scale at the same time. Another transformation than his Wrath form of Legendary Super Saiyan maybe? Btw, if I didn't say it more clearly earlier....really love how you describe the Susanoo. All the pre-transformation description, during, and the whole post-transformation part as well. P.S. Where are the 4 Marshalls currently? Guarding the Empire considering almost all of his entire elite Military might is currently present in another dimension? Though I do think that at least one should be present as a representative of the Marshalls to see their Emperor in his full glory.