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Comments of chapter undefined of Multiverse Conquest: Rise of the Saiyan Empire.

jnrmala679
jnrmala679Lv3jnrmala679

when is the next chap mate?

thats_right_3880
thats_right_3880Lv1thats_right_3880

please after vol 1 dont nerf mc too much of or just suddenly random strong being came and killed his family, please dont make too weak in front of his enemy..

HOS
HOSLv4HOS

Everything is amazing, the only problem is the mc is a bit ultra nationalists. If you can reduce it a bit and make him understand to respect lives outside of his empire. You can make it as a character growth after some major events like the unification of his current world.

Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5Deadrule_vivek

I like harem progress and character interaction ..... but I still think that he should focus on conquering his own world first ,but maybe Marek has some plans or something so let's see

ItsNotTheMoon
ItsNotTheMoonLv14ItsNotTheMoon

Was this masterpiece actually drop ?

LeipeMocro101
LeipeMocro101Lv4LeipeMocro101

Why is everything so amazing!?!?!? Love it!!

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Primordial_Origin
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Love the overall run of the story as well. The only thing that I would like to see more would be character growth for Marek outside of his Empire's citizens, friends, and loved ones. I don't really mind MC's with extreme personality types especially when the story is as good as yours, but too much of something is always bad, a little bit of balance wouldn't hurt. I just hope while doing so wouldn't destroy his overall character just for the personality growth. I'd rather have the current extreme one right now than destroy his character for the sake of the plot. Though that might soon get tiring or bland as well in the long run if he doesn't experience personality growth outside of his people. After all, an extreme kindness to his people and extreme apathy for those not considered his people is a monotonous personality type. --- With that done....THIS CHAPTER IS A BLAAAAAAAAAST for me. Never thought I would enjoy an entire chapter worth of descriptions. lol. I'm a daydreamer and just imagining what you've written here greatly pleases my mind. Love how you combined the Universal Rinngan's Susanoo with the Tenseigan. Though I think having 3 sets of weapons based on the personality of each face (meaning 4 for each face) would be better than almost a similar type of weapon(scimitar) for the whole Susanoo. Also, loved how it was foreshadowed by Whis that this isn't even close to his full extent yet. I would love to see that. After all, I can't really see him being strong than his already current state of using the Supreme Eyes of Naruto world on a Universal Scale at the same time. Another transformation than his Wrath form of Legendary Super Saiyan maybe? Btw, if I didn't say it more clearly earlier....really love how you describe the Susanoo. All the pre-transformation description, during, and the whole post-transformation part as well. P.S. Where are the 4 Marshalls currently? Guarding the Empire considering almost all of his entire elite Military might is currently present in another dimension? Though I do think that at least one should be present as a representative of the Marshalls to see their Emperor in his full glory.

DaoistaxMkIL
DaoistaxMkILLv1DaoistaxMkIL

Quando o mc vai ter algum avanço com as mulheres dele ta demorando

Cuerti
CuertiLv4Cuerti

tell me that you are the firstborn of the chuunibyou without telling me that you are the firstborn of the chuunibyou - the chapter

Eternal_Jokr
Eternal_JokrLv3Eternal_Jokr

-I thought the fight was very good so far, but I was waiting for the Legendary Super Saiyan, I'm sure she has even more potential, despite everything she's only at level one (Something like the full power of the Legendary Super Saiyan) and I'm sure she can have the Lssj 2 and so on

AnshinSaltz
AnshinSaltzLv1AnshinSaltz

Nothing to criticize, it's been a great job, whether it's building the characters or developing the world (main), if there's one thing I would complain about it would be the slow pace, but again that's my opinion.

C_S_Ames
C_S_AmesLv14C_S_Ames

I enjoy your story deeply. it has good development and the women he is interacting with his a good balance can’t wait for more chapters thanks

Assassynm
AssassynmLv4Assassynm

brutal este capitulo y mañana será mejor xD gracias por el capitulo

Ramiro
RamiroLv5Ramiro

thx for the chap!!

royal_fanfic54
royal_fanfic54Lv4royal_fanfic54

Nailed it