Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: My name is James, you can just - Wolverine

seems promising

Needs some editing.

Fix your dialogue. And add quotation marks please. Why does that conversation sound so cheezy? It's like two kids reading Shakespeare translation to modern English.

Victor 😁

Soooo... Logan?

friend when your character was born, a donkey urinated him and a dog bit his balls, as someone even in a fanfic can be so miserable

Was interested until you added a random sister smh no thanks

thanks for the chapter.

Проверка на русского поэтому пишу на русском я буду давать все камни

Hmmm. This is a good prologue

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Gracias por el Capitulo gracias

interesting start 👍

Sis-con?.