Comments of chapter undefined of Ravens of Eternity

So I unlocked a few more chapters after this incredible early pay wall and can tell you for sure, not anymore. This chapter was a catastrophe compared to the first few. They did this, than that, the others were awed... it reads like an extremely lazy writing style with all tell, no show and way to much showing off, which is not the same sadly. I think there might be a good story but not for this horrendous prize. Especially with 2 passes per chapter.