Comments of chapter undefined of Mysterious Transcendents

Prologue could have a tad bit longer just to give some context/detail but it's solid. Synopsis is a bit lacking though.

The synopsis could've been better

Okay really enticing prologue. You got me

It is an interesting prologue and I do wish the synopsis is a bit more descriptive. Your synopsis is going to be the thing that draws in the reader while also telling them about your book. There are a few things that I did mention in comment paragraphs to look at. It's just advice, you don't have to make any edits you don't want to. As much as I like short prologues, I do wish there was a little bit more details on what was going on. Like why was there a man in a suit with a child in a room, what the room was like, how the child was feeling, even what the child looks like... Overall, it looks interesting. It just needs a polish here and there.

A short and on point prologue is what I like

Please leave me a review, I want to know what I should work on