Comments of chapter undefined of Villain Retirement

Hmm, interesting take. Writing this in Hannah’s first person perspective was a strange choice, but I think it worked out. Thanks for the chapter!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Nice change of writing style for this chapter. It was nice to see Hannah's POV for a while.

nah i dont like it. i dont wanna be mean but aint nobody thinking like that. and the dialogue between hannah and chihiro feels forced.usually i like everything u wrire, but this one time i'll have to call this a miss

The build up is AMAZING, and switching to Hannah’s pov was great, I literally forgot that last chapter darkday was coming back so it really hit me in the end

I got chills at the end. very nice

Thank you for the chapter.

yes finally. retirements over time to get serious

ay will Reuben get his round 2 death as promised.

🎊 Welcome back 🎊

Thanks for the chapter 👍