Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: Master of Poison
Pokemon: Master of Poison
Remoon
Chapter comments13
while not a complaint, i just thought i should point something out. You may or may not be falling into one of many author traps with the movesets of your pokemon. It's still possible you can make it work without issue, but as the story progresses, you will likely drive yourself crazy on using moves. with all the elements you added to flesh out your original design on the pokemon world, the work you need to do going down the line will just keep increasing. again, this is not a complaint, i just felt i should mention it. best of luck
OK I love this story its just ot stills bothering me that you having kids killed and talking about so casually man I don't like seeing kids hurt that's a pet peev threatening too rip out eyes of children no matter the way kids dying before there time man I'm not putting down this story I respect it but it's weird
