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Comments of chapter undefined of The Devil In Guise

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KButler_4950
KButler_4950Lv12KButler_4950

I like the storyline, Ahmed I think all the things Valeria will try to do will backfire on her.

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sunshine_n_01
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The storyline Is good and while the editing wasn’t the best, it seems to be getting worse as the story progresses which makes It hard to follow. English is my first language so it may be harder for me to follow than others. There are also times in which the scenes jump which are also hard to follow

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Peter_Small
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i have a feeling that the beginning that queen Ariadne would win

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Wreckedship
WreckedshipLv14Wreckedship

Nice story but so many clerical errors makes me wonder what the word really was. it lost the meaning of the story