Comments of chapter undefined of Adventuring With Wishes

It feels like I am just reading a large combination of stupid, unfunny memes instead of a ff or novel.

Hey the idea is superb just run the chapter through a grammar corrected like grammarly or something

Isn't Indra an Otsutsuki?

The remember part about not killing people left and right as if he was murdering people since birth is not a good reason for that person to grow but should be already thought of as to adapt and grow from it.

I'm gonna drop I don't care if you don't care that im dropping, I'm typing this comment because I am honestly confused on how anyone has this low level comedy... this is some band kid comedy cringey stuff and it is to cringey to read and anyone who likes this stuff is just weird

If you add her to the haram am drop this and report this to the FBI and find you to kill you

Indra Otsutsuki is one of my favorite character in Naruto Series, his intellect, prideful and ruthless personality couple with his OP abilities and noble appearance is what makes him more cooler and the best. But seeing him act like this (in this ff) sigh!... you just ruined the image of my favorite character. The idea is good and have potential, just a little bit improvements in mc personality and the character interactions.

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Qingyue is best!

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