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Comments of chapter undefined of Star Immortal

Jlairu
JlairuLv11Jlairu

Such an overuse of brackets. A sentence is still meant to flow without reading the brackets. But here, if you don't read them you'll miss out on key info.

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

skipped a bit of ch mostly cause his comment about having fun with woman slaves put me off