Azrail93
while I do like the descriptions of the pokemon stats and so on; I feel the vast majority of your book has become a status screen display in the recent while. it becomes less special when you have to read about the status of a pokemon almost every other chapter or 3. it starts to get quite repetitive when reading about the same set of motions so soon after another. I also feel that you've spread the focus so thin across the pokemon that you get a sense of (who was that pokemon again?) we as the reader don't get nearly as much flavor or details of certain main squad members such as the horus express. Geo has an army, yes, but the army also limits the time and character interactions with said pokemon and other characters in the world you made. I think you do this worldbuilding and interactions quite well! Thus I'd love to see more of that in the future if possible.