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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Ignotus
IgnotusLv6Ignotus

An entire chapter describing two pokemon... I like detailed descriptions as much as anyone else, but isn't this a little too much?

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Dimas_Silva
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Thanks for the chapter

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Zo0my
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thanks for the chapter

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Narcox
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thanks for the chapter

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JonRedSea
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Thanks for the Chapter

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Greekfirefly
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Thanks for the update

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SenotStone
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Thanks for the chapter.

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DriftingFantasy
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Thanks for the chapter

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stads
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nice chapter thx for writing it

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Cody_Lee_Hoffman
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Thanks for the chapter

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Jeffrey_C_Kingston
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Thanks for the chapter..!

aaronbt
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this chapter is

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ElhitBunny
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Thanks for the chapter~

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Sethell
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Thanks for the chapter

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Jimena
JimenaLv6Jimena

Thank you for chapter

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aidan_6334
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Thanks for the chapter

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pieced
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every once in a while I come back and there's always so many new chapters, every single one is of great quality, just an amazing writer.

WaveringMoon
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while I do like the descriptions of the pokemon stats and so on; I feel the vast majority of your book has become a status screen display in the recent while. it becomes less special when you have to read about the status of a pokemon almost every other chapter or 3. it starts to get quite repetitive when reading about the same set of motions so soon after another. I also feel that you've spread the focus so thin across the pokemon that you get a sense of (who was that pokemon again?) we as the reader don't get nearly as much flavor or details of certain main squad members such as the horus express. Geo has an army, yes, but the army also limits the time and character interactions with said pokemon and other characters in the world you made. I think you do this worldbuilding and interactions quite well! Thus I'd love to see more of that in the future if possible.

Evan_Martin_6596
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Question if one can radiate their aura at a high enough intensity and also do the same for their psychic energy would they be able to produce a similar effect to conquerors haki?