Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Info dumps please just get to the point when you start story so i can even know if its good. So far its just afterlife junk

welp.. i just skipped 2 chapters...

you separate the dialogues too much, it seems like you do it to fill space, which makes reading boring

until now is all good. I love info dump

I read all 2 chapters and I think it's a nice read before reincarnation. Tho I wonder how this would affect MC in his 2nd life 🤔

It is a bit of an info dump, but it is a well written one. It doesn't happen often that I actually read all of it without skipping. So... Good work. Although I do hope it's not too long... 😅

I don't get why everyone is complaining. I liked the chapter![img=recommend]

see these are the kind of info dumps I can get behind. things that will be very relevant to the story going forward. carefully thought out without being too complex.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thank you for the chapter

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Hey I like your story I just found it. Have you thought of making a MHA Story like this.

the really weird spacing of everything isn't helping either

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nice story🥰

Thanks for the chapter~

I really liked it, the truth is that it feels different from all the fanfics I read, I mean, apart from explaining the things and consequences of your decision very well, it also gives you a logical reason for the reason. It's not like the others who tell you I'm going to reincarnate you because you're a good person or because I killed you. Accidentally, and the mc chooses endless skills all op but in the end he doesn't know how to use them I love your story keep it up