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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (dropped)

g105x7max
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Firstly. You have a very long storyline where absolutely nothing happens. Second, Johnny Silverhand is a short term celebrity. And thirdly, weakly expressed abilities of MС, including. For example, if you ask me now what abilities the MС has, I won’t be able to answer. I don't remember

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

I think reason story isn't doing well is cause it's slow, So people story on hold for a long time to binge all at once.

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JustaMim
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Sad to hear you’re losing motivation. This is one of the things I look forward to everyday lol. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. Can’t wait to see more of your works, no matter which fandom you decide on.

Alabado_sea_gonza
Alabado_sea_gonzaLv2Alabado_sea_gonza

Nice chapter. for a new book it could be from GoT (asoiaf) or Naruto

Thiago_Gomes_8808
Thiago_Gomes_8808Lv4Thiago_Gomes_8808

Obrigado pelo capitulo

Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

I dont leave comments on ever chapter but i do every couple chapters. I also interact with paragraph comments. To be honestly i lost interest at the end of the Alabasta arc. I was annoyed that we completely skipped over Robin. Being ambushed didnt help. I just got back into it today. But Jaja was annyoing sinceni didnt agree with the MC being so laidback after almost getting himself and the crew killed. Ill make sure to try to interact more and give some power stones Though.

Zuch
ZuchLv5Zuch

Thx for the chapter author XD XD

Edward_Desar
Edward_DesarLv13Edward_Desar

If you want a story on smaller scale than DC/Marvel movies, if you want to make it a big one than the comics. Otherwise i suggest an MC who knows in what he/she is but nothing more.

DarthCerdac
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Thanks for the chapter. I think you just need a break from this story. Just to clear your mind.

NoOb_MaStEr_690000
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its prob because based on what your protags doing rn, there arent any super epic/ cool moments. I get the devil fruit but like I don't even remember his moves. Navy 6 style is kinda overused but ok. more importantly I think that the one piece manga is at an all-time high, like personally, conquerers coating, awakening devil fruit, near-death fights(the vice-admiral one was cool but I think cuz of his devil fruit the fight was kinda underwhelming.), all this will probably will happen later on in the story. you should maybe write a chapter with an epic fight you can imagine of the future crew or something to become more motivated. Lastly, i feel that he doesn't need a devil fruit, but anyways thanks for the chapters

Jwebreader
JwebreaderLv1Jwebreader

I think that a fanfiction about Naruto would be the most osmosis solution with your kind of writing, and I am extremely curious to see what you could do in the spectacular universe of Kishimoto !

stads
stadsLv12stads

sorry to hear ya losing for this story nice background for the fishman

Irishdamned
IrishdamnedLv14Irishdamned

I thank you for the chapter.

purplePluto
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even if you start a new book I will still read both of them please don't drop this book.

Gorkarion
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I have read this fanfic at once and is one of the BEST one piece fanfics i have read congrats[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Thanks for the chapter

xXI_Like_swordsXx
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please never drop

xXI_Like_swordsXx
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niceeeeeee

Naginn
NaginnLv3Naginn

Thanks for the chapter

Mohamad_100
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I think dc would be good if someone hve the power of super man and can use magic and very intelligent and got with beautiful woman like cat women zattana