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Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: New Ash

nutt
nuttLv4nutt

daniel_urieta
daniel_urietaLv3daniel_urieta

No

PsionicPanda
PsionicPandaLv14PsionicPanda

If you can make The addition organic feeling i wouldnt mind her joining

SeRaPHin
SeRaPHinLv4SeRaPHin

Yes

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Maybe you could give her to Brock. That way he has somebody to hold at night and won’t feel as jealous of Ash.

Starcat777
Starcat777Lv4Starcat777

No

SuIIy
SuIIyLv4SuIIy

i think gisele wouldn't be a great add as her own personality isnt matched to ash she isn't a great trainer furthermore has no battle experience aside what she learned from the academy and the pokemons she has where already trained and it might get difficult to create a romance plot for her while writing the story so my advice is to go for the girls which you have plot already made or bit easier to write

NP_3228
NP_3228Lv5NP_3228

no, won't be able build up the romance in the short time they meet.

YANDERE_KUN
YANDERE_KUNLv4YANDERE_KUN

Well yes

Knight_Wolf
Knight_WolfLv4Knight_Wolf

no👎

Kurogano
KuroganoLv2Kurogano

So... Ever consider for allow trainers to be able to carry more then 6 pokemon in this story? For example trainers being able to apply for a higher ranked trainer license allowing for them to carry more then 6 pokemon with them up to a certain limit based on the rank. or... having Brock apply for a breeder license allowing for him to serve the role akin to a Pokeranch for the group allowing them to keep all their pokemon with them, but only having 6 'active' pokemon.

julienbarbotage
julienbarbotageLv4julienbarbotage

Yes

WalkingTall
WalkingTallLv4WalkingTall

No.

jfernandez_2852
jfernandez_2852Lv1jfernandez_2852

No.

Targas
TargasLv2Targas

yeah

Lucielgrey
LucielgreyLv4Lucielgrey

No

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

No

Herohero
HeroheroLv3Herohero

advise a no if there are too many girls it will lose its originality (authenticity given the time that this pokemon unfolds) . save a place for Aurore and Alicia🤣

Danstin_2010
Danstin_2010Lv5Danstin_2010

nop \(*w*)/

deadlydragon
deadlydragonLv3deadlydragon

No

Shiryue
ShiryueLv14Shiryue

no

daniel_urieta
daniel_urietaLv3daniel_urieta

No