Grim_Reaper_4508
Great novel and considering your English would probably drive my middle school English teacher crazy. her parents are Korean and she was born in the US with her whole family speaking Korean then picked up English from school. and your learning English. you've used the right words but wrong version. anyway if I didn't like your story enough to ignore your grammar I'd just stop reading because wrong grammer drive me crazy. keep up the effort I can speak 1 language fluently while for German/Spanish I could throw cuss words and maybe talk to a elementary school student.