prime_master
if you've got a problem with your grammar, why don't you got a translator?.just an advice from your reader, love your story plot though!
it's a long story. but I did hired someone. since I do a job I don't have much time. so, our deal was I'll tell and explain the plot to him and he will write it for me. we will share profit 50/50. but he did something I didn't expect. since I do job I don't have free time to check what's going on here. you'll understand what I am talking about if you read few more chapters.