Comments of chapter undefined of The Game Creator in Marvel(News)

lack luster interaction and now comes the ancient one and he is probably gonna bends to her whims.

it's better to focus on the gameplay instead of getting involved in the original story. And I want to see people's reactions to the game. maybe also the avengers and mutants will play the game. btw thx for the chapter and always healthy writer.

he a little to willing to let people get away with messing with him

I would like to thank my friend author, you are putting more interaction between the mc and the world, this is cool, of course the games part is cool, but seeing more human contact and everything else is always welcome, the story becomes real and less cold.

thanks for the chapter

So much forced plot and why was the professor even paying attention to a nameless mutant? Nothing in this chapter made any sense.

I sure hope Kara is special…he went through a LOT of effort to keep her

I hope he can make more games and stay out of these stupid affairs of mutants as various supernatural gods that seem to have a never ending amount of problems

you should simply erase this chapter and the second half of the previous one from this reality, this fic is suddenly going downhill because you want to force the mc to involve himself in the canon for no other reason than 'well they have jean and prof X yknow, they have the ancient one yknow, and the runes don't work at all yknow'

did this great novel turns into junk from gold in one and a half chapter?

this really felt forced

Well I recommend not having a direct conflict, the elder deals more with external factors, and the mc is a person I was born into the world, although his magic coming from outside is not something that will necessarily cause a war or something, since he wants to create a sanctuary, it would be good to have a relationship of peaceful coexistence with the other magical force in the world, now I have another point, I recommend the mc increase the area of ​​his land, and create within it a type of hidden realm , so he'll be less worried about other people trying to invade, besides being able to build things that you can only see in fantasy worlds and all that, like castles and flying islands and things like that, and with regards to mana, he can do two things, first create locations there to reder from the earth and in the future from the universe that would gather mana and send it there, and with time research a mana generator to generate natural mana for your realm and for yourself that would help a lot to the advancement of your mages and the own tion of mc.

Me gusta ver un desarrollo mas personal del MC y su entorno, solo que se siente forzado la aparición de los x-men y ahora de todos los hechiceros (un poco exagerado el ultimo grupo). Pero la primicia del fanfic son los videojuegos llevados a la realidad de marvel. Si te centras demasiado en el desarrollo individual del MC y dejas de lado la trama de los juegos, este fanfic perdería su esencia

it must be so annoying to talk to her she would know everything that you would say I would be so annoyed

Thanks for the chapter Wish you well author Keep up the good work

thanks for the chapter loved it

Gracias por el capitulo.

Keep going please 🤩👌

My god, I didn't know that hosting the phoenix force (which Jean shouldn't even know exists thanks to the bald one) came with a course on how to break runes