BlackStar_BH
A problem I think you'll have is that he can solo the One Piece verse in a day easily with his ATG cultivation right now. Unless you are gonna nerf him which no one here wants, you should probably just focus on the women or adventure in One Piece. I hope this story focuses more on the Chat Group than One Piece but it's up to you. Great work so far!
What i hate is not your story but your mc himself. He can be all time pervert all he want but how scum is he going to be that make me hate him. He play womans feeling like toys and he act like all world owe him something. I literally wish there is someone make a fanfic and play your mc like a toy. Anyway, like i said your story is good but how you potray your mc is what make this story i hate.