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A lot of new characters introduced at once. It's a little hard to keep track of them. This chapter raises more new question instead of deepening or answering any of the ones raised in the first.
The protagonist is a girl. I think that's something you should've mentioned in chapter 1.
chap 2 is good. especially when it ended with witch finding her sister in Helgrey
I literally read chapter 2 to hopefully have more questions answered, and now my brain has a surge of even more questions. Am I in the matrix?
wait, is it two years later or two years earlier? I am the big confusion.
oi! I need more chapters!
Jesus, vampires scare me
Hey... This can't be it! The author has a lot of work to do, because I have just run out of chapters to read!