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Comments of chapter undefined of Sweet Revenge: My Sweet Life With You!

Bre317
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would like to suggest to the author to ease into your flashbacks by using bold or italicized prose until the flashback ends. I don't mind that they come in the midst of a scene but it is confusing when there is no signifier to denote the beginning or end. would help the flow, I think.

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Shiny_Star5683
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i dun like Yanna

Tanha_E_Nahin
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i feel really sad for ayami