Heavy_Helium
Just read through all the chapters, so far the story is great. The grammar overall is good, there were some typos/mistakes that I pointed out (might have missed some) and some Capitalization "issues" mostly just what I would capitalize though some names and such were capitalized. Plot has been good and the characters are also well written. So in short thanks for the chapters, great story so far and keep up the good work. =)