Comments of chapter undefined of Rebirth: Over the Horizon

idk if the author is going back to previous chs but this recap would flow better say if the mermaid told it to Adam than just a random flashback 🤔 it would also allow the author to use less fillers etc in the chapter/s just food for thought if you plan on editing old chapters

quite the good read so far keep up the good work

Ok i bookmarked it..hope to see steady updates

Thanks

Why did you write this? Yk at this point you were just saying that all men would r*pe that half fish emily, but now ur saying she is engaged?! So you are encouraging players to r*pe an engaged jalf fish?! . . .

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Thanks for the chap

this strory is underated