Woo! This re-write came a lot be than the original chapter. Beranger in the previous version was fool by the prince wich I think was not in line with Beranger as a character đđź
I enjoyed this rewrite immensely. Well done. It feels more in character with how Berengar is as a person. Seriously you have done a good job Zentmeister
another great re-write, i remember he kissed the prince's hand the first time they meet, and that action made him look like a playboy who wants to get close to a beautiful woman( well "WOMAN")