Comments of chapter undefined of Tyranny of Steel

You've done an incredible job, and I can't wait to see more of your work.

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Hmmm...…. SO MC sees his betrothment as just a tool for his rise...…. but of course he will fall for her as usual (If this novel also follows the typical forced marriage plot)

12 year olds then are like 18-19 year olds now

Is his industrial park in any way secured against sabotage or theft? Should be if it is to be his lifeblood.

Yep12years esa normal un that age ay least he don't nerd to Larry with His sister🤗

the author when writing this chapter be like like "Ahahahaa Now the perfect time to pitch up that title card"

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thx for the chapter😻

1417 eh? He still has a chance to kick ottoman booty

this is so stupid, kill the brother then break the engagement off....why would the guy want him to marry his daughter anyway, they think he is weak and arrogant. makes no sense

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

author mate hats of bro love the work

And once more an anachronism. "Healthy glow" is a modern way to look at things and even then more of a fashion statement than actual health benefit, seeing the high rates of skin cancer many with a healthy glow experience. In the medivial era white skin was a sign of standing and there are some theories out there that blueblood comes from the concept of being white enough that the blue in your veins is visible. Being white was desirable and is also one of the reasons the royal family of the ottomans would pass in Sweden as natives today.

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Hmmm, the novel plot intrigue me. But the pacing of introductory chapters to establish Julian's new identity as Berengar are not so good. Julian sounds like he is instantly ready to be 'Berengar', given the lack of panic/confusion since he was yeeted to literal realm of unknown. Moreover while fortunately clarified later on his family's financial status, the lack of such explanation early on made Julian's sudden drive to evolve his domain's steel production is out of place as well. The first order of actions for any earth normies that got yeeted would have to gather info of their immediate surroundings, which will give motive of their next course of action. For now I'll take this as early chapters issue only. The plot interests me, so I want to read further on how this will improve and grow over time.

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