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Comments of chapter undefined of Dainsleif: Grand order

Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

And in first paragraph. Change 'very' to 'every'. And your eighth paragraph is up and down. Please correct it. It will be helpful for future users.

F_fantashi
F_fantashiLv2F_fantashi

Ok

Illona_sama_5462
Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

You can now ask for a contract, if you want. The rules have changed.

Illona_sama_5462
Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

My dear author! You're so much popular now. I'm so happy for you.

F_fantashi
F_fantashiLv2F_fantashi

Hi

Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10Soun_Phavin

nice cliffhanger

Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

I suggest you use Grammarly software. It will help a lot in writing. I do the same.