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Comments of chapter undefined of Dainsleif: Grand order

F_fantashi
F_fantashiLv2F_fantashi

Hi

Illona_sama_5462
Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

You can now ask for a contract, if you want. The rules have changed.

Illona_sama_5462
Illona_sama_5462Lv3Illona_sama_5462

My dear author! You're so much popular now. I'm so happy for you.

Soun_Phavin
Soun_PhavinLv10Soun_Phavin

nice cliffhanger

Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

And in first paragraph. Change 'very' to 'every'. And your eighth paragraph is up and down. Please correct it. It will be helpful for future users.

Kandpalbhaskar010
Kandpalbhaskar010Lv4Kandpalbhaskar010

I suggest you use Grammarly software. It will help a lot in writing. I do the same.