Comments of chapter undefined of Demonic Devourer's Development

Thanks author for writing this story. It was nice almost ymthe entire way but I find yhe ending quite lacking and abrupt.

Thank you for the story. I did enjoy it, but was disappointed by the shortness of the middle, it only lasted 2 expeditions. The beginning was great and the end was pretty satisfying, generally much harder to do (the last chapter could have been spaced out over a few more chapters, felt like burnout). It just felt that with Voren's highest abilities, though very useful, were not as evolved enough to take on gods; like he had only eaten one Dragon and could take down a god in under a minute. It makes the gods seem like a much more manageable threat; from the time they kill him once to their defeat, maybe a year has passed. I was hoping he would develop more interesting abilities by hunting more mythical monsters. He would travel beyond this small corner of the world, and he would meet more interesting people along the way, especially new harem members. The capture by the angel was what kicked off the climax and there was no turning back, but that could has been held off longer. Overall still would recommend to someone who wants a fun quick read, but maybe does not develop all of its potential.

Thanks for the great story. The end might have been lacking but it didn’t invalidate the amazing chapters throughout this novel.