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Comments of chapter undefined of Douluo Dalu: Serpent's Legacy

Desertstorm
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Could you post a chapter with the characters current rings. It would make it easier to add to them without being too overpowering

Grimsight
GrimsightLv6Grimsight

I suppose that one of the paths would be the city of slaughter, to begin his mission of inheritance from God, then I don't know if you will involve him with the war between empires, you could create a little romance with possible couples, I don't know if he will have a harem or not, as for techniques it is difficult for me to think of any, I tried to look for some in anime, but almost always with fog types that the protagonist already uses, the only thing that comes to mind are the techniques that cobra uses in fairy tail, such as skills spiritual. When something occurs to me I will comment on it.

username_569
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for weapons spirits, how about a weight/size skill. it can increase/decrease the weight/size of the weapons at will giving it more damage potential, and be more versatile since they could swing it fast and then increase the weight/size for more damage and make it hard to dodge. (ps. would be better if these skills were their own ring, so 2 rings in total)for beast spirit: for attack a skill that can store damage taken and then release a stronger attack (revenge counter from seven deadly sins)for agility: a skill that increase their speed as long as they stay in motion and not get hit, and for as long as their body can handle the strain (so they could potentially be the fastest thing alive as long as their body can handle it and they don't get hit or stop)general skill: surrounding the body/weapon in an element/energy that can increase something (power, speed, piercing, ect). fire = damage and burn over timelightning = speed/piercing and can increase reaction time (harder to hit)poison = corrosion/damage and maybe weaken the opponent after prolong damage (kind of like the raikage cloak from naruto)

Anachan
AnachanLv13Anachan

Spirit skills for War Flag 1- Defensive Formation increases defense and vitality by 50%, creating a hard shell around the beneficiaries From: Earth Turtle 1.800 years old 2 -Charging formation Increase attack power and speed by 50%. Shrouds the people attacking in a cloud of darkness which masks the vision of people outside the attacking formation. From: Black Mist Panther 7.400 years old 3-Purifying Flag helps purify poisons, venoms and elemental effects such as lightning paralysis and darkness corruption (and heals damage inflicted by these) From: 10.400 years old Jade Swan 4- Chain of Command “Every army needs its leaders and communication is key to make sure everything goes smoothly” Designates one Captain, up to 5 Commanders, up to 5 Squad leaders under each commander and up to 10 troops under each squad leader . (Minimum of one Captain and 5 troops) Leaders gain the ability to telepathically communicate and see through the eyes of their troops. Communication may happen individually or issuing a commanding wide order. People may only communicate with their direct superior or horizontally. Example: Commander_1 can not issue order to a squad leader under commander_2 but may communicate with commander_2. Captain gains the 60% increase in speed and spirit power regeneration. Commanders 50%. Squad leaders 40%.Troops 30% From: 34.000 Golden Goose Emperor 5- Morale Domain Increase all alies atributes by 40% and decrease all enemies’ attribute by 20% Increases allies morale and concentration and decreases enemies’ morale and concentration/focus, making them more easily frightened, confused, heaving less coordination between themselves as well as little will to fight. From: Blue Lion Emperor 57.000 6- Army’s Second Breath “Sometimes an army is attacked while they are still resting and catching their breath, with this flag you not fear back to back battles!” Instant restoration of 100% soul power and in 5 seconds recovers all previous injuries. From:Life Spirit Lizard 74.000 years old

Haiz_ghoul97
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[Sun Chariot] From a Scorching Sun Steed, effects are a materialisation of a flaming horse around the user and increases all physical attributes of the user by 30% for 5 mins after the collision of enemies. The facts will stack with every subsequent ring, increasing 5% and 5 mins every subsequent ring.

Haiz_ghoul97
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[Underworld's Five Rivers] From a five head crowned hydra, effects consist of fire poison so that when they run soul power, poison which leads to disillusionment, corrosion, nausea and permanently tainting the spiritual power with poison unless removed

Makenzie_Stancer
Makenzie_StancerLv1Makenzie_Stancer

Maybe a more explorative arc eg mc travelling to the icy north or maybe the fire region

DaoisthuLXiM
DaoisthuLXiMLv1DaoisthuLXiM

I read some coment about spirit skill but i think it better to evolve the spirit first and then you can talk about ss,the current spirit MC is little bit over Rated,the snake don't have much option about fighting style,if the MC fighting enemy that can resist poison or enemy that have long range with high demage that gonna be end,Soo make the spirit of MC evolve is option,you can make it evolve by consume some flower on some place or drink blood or sum,and spirit can evolve into hydra with death and imortality or dragon that have evil attribute is up to you, but the point' IS THE MC SPIRIT IS SNAKE WITH POISON, i don't know how the Mc can defete lot enemis with that trash attribute,add some ultimate attribute and the MC spirit Will have lot fighting style option

Haiz_ghoul97
Haiz_ghoul97Lv4Haiz_ghoul97

[Shadow Mist Evasion] From a Cloud Mist Leopard, effects are a dark mist converges around the user and his 3 clones and are spread wherever the user travels. The user can then choose when he wants to switch with the clones at any point of time in the mist to launch a surprise attack which has a 50% piercing attribute. every subsequent ring, one more clone is added with a 5% increase in piercing attribute.

Haiz_ghoul97
Haiz_ghoul97Lv4Haiz_ghoul97

[Monochrome Serpent's Gaze] From a gorgon/medusa, effects are a monochrome aura is emitted from user or from the martial soul's eyes and causes enemies to be immobile and leaving them vulnerable, there is a also a slight corrosion and petrification of targets

Nrusingha
NrusinghaLv4Nrusingha

similar techniques like shadow clone jutsu

Nrusingha
NrusinghaLv4Nrusingha

why not a attract and repulsion techniques

Pasindu_Weerakkody
Pasindu_WeerakkodyLv4Pasindu_Weerakkody

Maybe whynot do some trials of the dragon clan he got when absorbing the 5th ring?

XAZVAPB0OTH
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