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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology

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Thanks for the chap[img=exp]

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Hey author you can take ideas from the novel “The Iron tyranny “ for the novel. The character of the King is shown good in it. Don't make the king too Saint. He sounds too middle aged and make him a little hot blooded

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Daoist633282
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Bro i think that you need to bring in a more Indian approach in the story like chanakya strategy and tactics as well as more pov from surrounding Kingdoms's

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Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new , the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of novel.

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Bronalo use indian words in novel and include Sanskrit in the studies

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Chirashu_Jindal
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Hey author will there be other reincarnators in the story to make it more interesting ?

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Rigchel
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Well the military reforms were already carried out before and the process of introducing civil reforms is now ready as well

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Daoist633282
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But overall it's a really interesting story

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Creativityiskey
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Thanks for the chapter!!!

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00Sidney00
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Gracias por el capítulo

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107
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Plz reply something author

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Hey author when will you write about territory expansion