Witchhazel
this opening very intersting
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The opening is really interesting that it gets me hook up! I love it!
okay next
Hmm the first chapter alone has piqued my interest
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
It kind of confused me at the beginning. I don't know who's talking. But, I got the hang of it later on. Nice chapter.
Beautiful opening with excellent imagery. Love it!đ„°
Nice
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I canât remember when I last encountered a first-person POV, especially in a Xianxia/Wuxia novels. Although the perfect English grammar made me feel that Iâm reading a western story, it is a great first chapter nevertheless.
Love this story! Very different and unique.
*reading*