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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Uncle_Sheogorath
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Author, why do you do this to your SI?

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D_d3tah
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How evil is he? Would he commit mass murder or genocide for his own interests or would he enslave people and force them to do his bidding. I don’t know if the MC is sociopathic or psychopathic.

DaoistJaChq2
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using an excited side character for an info dump is an interesting idea

maheshwaran_pillai
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I stopped reading after finding how handsome his face is 3 times in the first paragraph.

Airelda
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After reading this chapter, I wouldn't be surprised if Dumbles kept an extremely close eye on him to find out what schemes the MC has. Such accomplishments at such a young age and he wants to go teach children, in the year Harry starts school?

Kono_phineas_da
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I’m all for wish fulfillment but it always irks me when they don’t let us see them grow into their powers I truly dislike when we start with them already aged up

ArzeusT
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I'm giving it a chance because the author's other novel is good, I hope this one is the same!

MOREHAREM
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Frizent
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Mala idea adular tanto a tu MC en el primer capítulo, lo colocas en un pedestal cuando no tenemos idea de quién es él (La mayoría de autores que usan esta técnica fallan miserablemente), en mi gusto personal este tipo de cosas tiene un mejor desarrollo si se demuestra con hechos poco a poco, porque de esta manera no tiende a deseccionar demasiado rápido, aunque espero que esta historia no sea de esa clase, como ejemplo de un buen desarrollo en esta temática recomiendo "A Certain Hogwarts Magician Professor", por ahora seguiré leyendo a ver si esta historia tiene una buena calidad.

GodOfSolitude
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Thanks for the chapter bro

Carlos_Ed3ardo
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Noah_Montgomery
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Laying a bit think with the interaction with the women. A bit too mut h exposition in one interaction.

RogueCrescent
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degermon
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Thanks

NecoArkForever
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I had no desire to read as it's a harem which I don't really like but I liked that the MC would become a professor so why not?

klostrez
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thanks for the chapter

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

Thank you kindly for the chapter 😁

Thymetro
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susan bones?

Thymetro
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Great beginning!

jax_0
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Why is it called Harry Potter if it's multiversal