Comments of chapter undefined of The Heir To Magic

sorry but author are you ok?? one you say he has good mental defence and them albums read every word of his mind?? come on mate ..

Hey easyread, although i’m still a little disappointing that the aeternus universe is only updating weekly now and going on patreon, I’m glad you’re still writing more, even if it isn’t an original story. :)

your sentences are barely strung together, it reads more like individual statements. how can a natural occlumencer not feel a person enter his mind, and then blow up the head attached to it for daring to do so? he wasnt even mad about it. this is gonna be a dumbledore simp fic isnt it? dumbledore at his best is grossly incompetent, nice or evil it doesnt matter unless his intent is to destroy the world he is useless

moooooorrrrrreeee

keep it coming get to gringots

I like this Dumbledore.

Thanks for the chapter.

great mc is going to be another pawn for Dumbledore

I thank you for the chapter.

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work and please don't drop the story

thanks for the chapter 💖

Thanks for the chapter 💖

awesome story can't wait for the next chapters.😎👍

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