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Comments of chapter undefined of Sovereign of Blood Everlasting

Teial
TeialLv15Teial

thanks for the chapter, they're good but the girls sometimes and up with a "he" and it gets slightly confusing after a while. i should also re-read to check if it's really 2 women and a little girl like i think it is

Teial
TeialLv15Teial

added in paragraph comments, sorry for being late with it, work kept me away from civilisation

VladDraculMichael:WHERE IS THE ERROR SO I CAN CORRECT IT?