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Comments of chapter undefined of Back For My Daughter

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Vamsi_Prathap
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Author san you are just piling up things that are to be solved by MC without moving the plot. It is so frustrating to read now, plot with MC and his family is going very slow. I get that it's a slice of life novel and plot is really slow in these types of novels. But you are just piling up the problems, feelings of women and villians that are to be confronted by the MC and it just makes me disconnected to the plot. I don't even remember a lot of things that are happening now. I suggest author san to solve one problem at a time and move on to the next. 1. Like eliminate a threat and move on to the next. 2. Sort your feelings for a women and move on to the next. I request author san to pick up pace because after 700+ chapters there isn'tany significant progress in the plot. This is just a suggestion from a reader which loves to read your novel daily. Thank you for the chapter.

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