Comments of chapter undefined of Caspian the Great
Caspian the Great
DaSalvatore
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Oooh! I hope you make Caspian take Daenerys' title as Breaker of Chains, get him multiple Unsullied army and the male version of "Mhysa", and become a temporary king of Essos before he sets sail back to Westeros to take the throne.
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DaSalvatore
honestly your a great writer although I hate this ark because he didn't need to go to essos to find dragon eggs he could have just found it like how he found his sword in a hidden cave on dragonstone. this just pretty much forced the plot to happen the same way even though Caspian already changed it
Like why do you repeat every sentence multiple times. Like this whole chapter could be very easily condensed in less than half of its current length. I dont need to read that caspian loves tommen and mycrella every single paragraph of a chapter, or how he hates joffery. Could you please just like not write unnecessary stuff
