Victor_Weismann
Well I saw this coming although honestly I would have preferre it if Tasha and Volk stayed together instead of you going out of your way to destroy Volk’s image and everything else about him. It’s not like Victor needed her in the harem either if you wanted to add someone to represent the werewolf faction Maya would have been just fine although she is practically the female version of Vlad.
what competent? i don't remember he was ever presented as competent, as far as i remember only Tasha was said to control the politics in Samar and that was way before. Volk was never said to have anything about intelligence it was just that he was most powerful and king and even he was able to become a king cause of Tasha, but you know just cause you are most powerful you can't become ruler. And about letting Volk and Tasha together, As you already know how Tasha's personality was defined, Volk needed to completely defeat and overpowered her to dominate her, but with Tasha's arrogant personality it was never possible. And not to say Volk was cheating on her with multiple women and has children outside of her knowledge, It was bound to happen even if victor didn't interfere. And its good this way with Tasha becoming strong and has intelligence worthy of ruler, She is much better Monarch for werewolf, not to say with her being lover of Victor, werewolves will be under him too. I don't like maya. And about Hestia not trying to protect her family, why did you even want her to do that? Did you not see what that family did to her? and even if she wanted why should she question Vic who gave her home?
GodOfDeath1999:I get that but before the Samar arc Volk was presented as a competent leader who earned the respect and friendship of Vlad the vampire king himself. But after Victor arrived at Samar you kept putting him down over and over again and making him seem like a joke while trying to present Tasha as this competent person who Volk was restricting. You could have alllosed Volk to be competent and have him just become another ally to Victor and Vlad instead you went out of your way to destroy him and have him oppose Victor time sffer time and decided to Cuck him in the end. Also speaking of destroying characters images let’s talk about Hestia you present her as this kind and caring individual who deeply loves her family yet Victor literally killed, enslaved, or is currently abusing most of her family members. Yet I haven’t seen her so much as express any sadness, anger, hatred, or any other feelings on the matter. Sure ok the deaths and enslavement was inevitable a war happned between her family and Victor’s and that was the end result they lost but hey silver lining at least most are alive. She hasn’t tried to even bargain for better conditions for Poseidon and Athena does she believe her position is too low to do so since she isn’t Victor’s lover? Or does she just intend to let her family suffer for eternity? At the very least seems kinda weird and out of character to me.
A small chapter with just 2k worlds, I'll post another one as soon as I solve a problem, it's basically the same car problem, I recently returned my red car, a Fiat strada vulcano. Today, I will pick up another car, the Chevrolet Montana premier. I have to solve the problem with the bureaucracy now, and go to the doctor afterwards. ugh. Btw, the reference illustration for Tasha on discord, if someone would be kind enough to put it here, I would appreciate it, I know many readers don't follow me on discord. But basically there are all the character references in illustrations. I'll be back in 5 - 7 hours, and I'll post the chapter again this time with the usual amount of words which I post which is 3k around.
It would be a very fun and informative chapter. When we have a SNU SNU chapter with all the Progenitor lovers going at him at once. It would be fun to read about them talking about what it means to be a female Progenitor and how it's affecting them. Especially when they all love the same Alpha Male Progenitor. And planning how they want to expand their race with Victor by giving birth to their daughters and stuff.
Message for the Author - don’t you think he’s outgrown the name “Alucard”? That started because he was the anti Dracula vampire, but he is now so much more than a vampire… so shouldn’t his name evolve too? My thoughts is he should have a unique name not tied to anything, just his. That would match his new personality far more than Alucard.