Victor_Weismann
What? Did you expect cliche drama of crying men and women? Yes, actually, I was planning to do this, I even made two chapters of 2000 words each, I was going to release it yesterday, but... In the end, I had made a mistake, this attitude does not match the attitude of the current characters. Current Agnes no longer loves Adonis with the same 'level' as Victor, in a way she has already moved on. Persephone has matured into the goddess she was. And Violet, just had regret. In the end, everyone just needed closure to move on, acting more mature is the correct answer here.. So I had to delete the two chapters I made, and redo it all over again... UGH! I haven't slept since yesterday, I really hope these two chapters are good, sigh. I'm not very confident to be honest, I hope you like it. Anyway, good morning, I'll go to sleep now, I'm really tired.
AI generated dragon names, I think this could help victor to be the name of the new race, because in some mythologies and stories the name of a race is derived from the name of its ancestor or the name that expresses the titles it has (not all) 1)Yonrolagon (Blood Dragon) 2)Drortidon (spirit and nature) 3)Magjalaga (Vampire Dragon) 4)Figan (destruction and beginning) 5)Frigaster (blood and nature) 6)Shougaster(Alucard) 7)Noafak (Sovereign) 8)Sheslanga (Blood Emperor)
This should definitely put Persephone down the path of joining the harem since Adonis was finally able to express his true feelings without any repercussions. Especially about Agnes and what she did to him. Agnes has no right to deny Persephone from joining the harem and now Violet sees that what Adonis did was for the betterment of the current present time. If Persephone never acted the way she did towards Adonis then that future may have come to pass. As an empress she will definitely see that and plan for a different future than what she saw. Especially with the new change in Victor that is organic.
I see what Adonis did for the future as the best gamble that anyone could ever make. A true Alpha Male decision of sorts. Especially with how it changed Victor into the Alpha Male that he is today. Despite everything that Adonis views as weak in himself this decision was probably the only Alpha moment for him tragically. But! It has "eternally paid off" with the path that Victor is on. His sacrifice is a catalyst that we all appreciate as readers.
I can't wait to see the new conquesting Victor when it comes to new women for his harem now. With how his harem adapts and is now emboldened to conquer the expansion of the harem itself. With them adding "worthy" women as his mistresses and finally going on the offensive with their Yandere Harem plans. To benefit both their family and Victor's faction. Just like the second coming of Solomon. Not in a pokemon like way of course. Certain women that we already know of and have read their "development (SAMAR)" can finally enter the harem regardless of their past position or "personal relationship history."
This was a difficult to write Victor and the way you built the story leading to these chapters it was very tricky to make it work and sound correct but personally I think you did do justice. I think Agnes understands now that she and Persephone are the same with two different approaches but not that different so blaming her and throwing shade on her is in a way hypocritical and I think after been with Victor she has grown out of that personality. I think you did well handling Violet here, I would have approached this slightly different, been a father of two girls myself, sort of passing the baton to Victor. Keep it short and tight and end it here. and now develop Persephone to get feelings for Victor and build the Yandere personality for her. I think there will be better resolution when Victor takes both Agnes and Persephone at the same time. Which in a case is sort making Adonis dream fulfilled in away. I donât. See violet joing this threesome. It will be weirdâŚ