Victor_Weismann
........ Yes, no more fight writing for awhile, these three chapters were the hardest chapters I've done in my entire novel, it took a lot of time, but they were also the most satisfying, I feel like I've progressed through my fight scenes , now, I will study these three chapters to see if I can find ways to improve the fight even more.
Green hats are being made as we read this. Tasha and Maya must realize the cultural impact this fight has and must embrace the new future that it represents. Fenrir was the one who protected them. And now there is a loving Sigma Male in front of the two of them that is able to bring out Samar's full potential. Along with their full potential as future Harem Members. Vic.... these two have been given a lot of development. Time to smack them in the head with an invisible and imaginary "harem hammer" to get their opinions changed. Pronto!!!