Victor_Weismann
A bit to cliche for my taste~ Also smart use of voilet to narrate victors improvements! đ Thanks for the chap!
Take it one step at a time, youâre doing good so far, to much will bore the readers with exposition and to little willl confuse the readers with a lack of knowledge but youâve struck a nice balance so far!
Victor_Weismann:Umu! I really don't want to get out of the 'cliche', I'm going to try to do my job, but as I'm a new author writing original, I don't want to make complex plots etc. I'm just going to focus on interesting character development, and cool world development.
this instantly became one of my favourite novels. i hope the author to seriously start writing this novel as his serious original work while simultaneously improving himself, rather than writing a simple novel work for practicing purpose, if you are. This novel has huge potential imo, and I can't help but have much high anticipation from it. Anyways thank u author for this wonderful work and keep writing.