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Comments of chapter undefined of My Seduction System Of the Gods

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My Seduction System Of the Gods

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Narutoss5
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Story wise it was lgoid but from Grammer point of view, it was not that good. There should be more punctuations. It felt like the story was not flowing smoothly. Otherwise it was a great chapter.

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I always make sure to check my readability or grammar through Grammarly to ensure good writing, but sometimes mistakes slip through that also involves readability, clarity, engagement and delivery. I try to find any mistakes I can, but sometimes they just slip through. Thank you for reading!

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Nikola_Niko
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Truth be told arthur, This chapter was greater than any other, atleast to me. Not cuz the Mc did a good thing killing that teacher(such thoughts are pure naive as he himself uses ability to create and enhance the desires of others) but because Dark themes are just my fav...🤷🏼‍♂️😂Keep up tge good work!

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pedaame011
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thanks for the chapter

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LawWillOblivionK
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Thanks for the chapter. This is so far te best chapter of the novel. I like how you portrayed different dieties.I have an idea:Why not give the mc Ghost Riders Penance Stare .Another one I would like to suggest is the Boons Granted by Drinking Essence of the Afterlife Elder God-King .They will help the mc .But the last one is Overpowered. So you can grant them part by part and also at the end Give the mc Divinity of Afterlife

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Narutoss5
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And did you forget the new teacher Sophia?

2yr
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