Deep_Sky
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Just a suggestion. the flow is way too fast. You will run out of content soon if you take it this fast. Why not slow it down? I won't urge you to do it. just take my words or leave it, up to you.
I hate changed pov like this... even though its tell more details than not, it's still make my head hurts
good very good so far
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merci
Thx
