Comments of chapter undefined of Epoch of Violet Star
Epoch of Violet Star
Fallensnug
Chapter comments21
Now here comes the hard part, keeping stuff fresh. Crossing my fingers that the author planned their story out instead of just writing whatever they want. There’s only so much descriptions can do to pad out the action scenes and distract readers before they get bored and catch on to what your doing after realising the MC is too op. Here’s to wishing for slightly faster releases.
You’re still in the clear as of right now, we’re really still in the prologue of the novel and your premise was interesting enough to have me hooked on the story for a while. I think your next step is to start with characterisation to keep us caring about both our protagonist and other important characters. I’m not going to hold it against you if you don’t do your releases as I understand it’s just hobby, therefore keep writing as you wish. I’ll be here for a while to give a slightly more critical outlook on some chapters (unlike most other posting empty praises) and then write a review around 40~ chapters in. Good luck with whatever you’ve been doing.
Fallensnug:Oof. The pressure's on. But you are speaking the truth. If my story really ends up as you say, it would turn people off. It's why I'm taking so long to update. I'm really am trying to have something planned out, but at the same time, I have been just winging it as I go along. Well that and plus me being a tired working class while trying to keep up with school. There's only so much I could do about the steady releases with this being nothing more than a hobby of mines. If I were a contracted author, I would already have 30 chapters by now. I do have something planned out, but right now, it's still rough. I'll let you in on something. It's not just about the MC being op, it's about her trying to fit in to her new life especially from the life she's been living up to now. And don't worry, it won't always be about one-sided fights like you would expect. Well, that's all I'm going to say for now since even I'm not sure how it will turn out. Because I'm still planning.
