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Comments of chapter undefined of My Idle Gaming System

Shanro_Arkneds
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Well. Inventory is a pretty common feature in systems

Tim_Widener
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ok. interesting . easy to follow 👍

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Ezra_Berger
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Very interesting, im excited to see how the story progresses

c_pantoja619
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hmmm interesting I came from your other novel and I love it so Imma add this to my reading list to check how it goes

Sphere117Reading
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Quite good i like it a lot, decent premise, lazy people tend to be my bane in stories but as long as he’s not “that” lazy should be quite enjoyable. However if you Adui ever wish for some ideas for original or unique takes on a diverse amount of stories just send a comment here, got plenty like at minimum i believe around 34 different plot lines. However I’m quite terrible at writing as in it looks and feels very well mechanical in a sense, not exactly able to bring out that story spirit, If you wish for a example look at the the interstellar Fleet translated story. it’s quite subpar however the basic idea of a being commanding a empire and building it up over time. It is essentially similar to my idea except it would be a mage who eventually became the ruler of his planet and was interested in exploring the stars, by using runic circles they managed to create a FTL drive for their ships. and then expanded. in it there could or won’t be the MC being a transmigrator or could or won’t have a “system” it all depends on many different choices. there’s much more to it but obviously because this is a comment i can’t make it too long. However that’s just one idea, I’ve got many for either action military, Western Fantasy, Eastern Fantasy, Sci-fi, Horror or any of them combined. Since your such a great writer i decided to share a bit of my idea if your slightly interested. So yeah if your interested you can just comment here otherwise well i believe this can be a pretty good story, maybe not as good as the first but pretty good. So hope you continue it.

Confusion
ConfusionLv13Confusion

Adui, why do I always feel byped reading your stories. Do you perhaps use… NSG (NovelSodiumGlutimate)?

Confusion
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UnkownMans
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akirakunz
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Well this system and the world background are nothing new. But the story is good,and until now was better written than most of those similar novels. The mc is pretty good and we don't have too much cliche (like a step sister, or faceslap with some young master or maiden)(i hope we won't have too much later=

Darkcolor
DarkcolorLv15Darkcolor

It doesn’t matter what this author writes I LOVE his storytelling.

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Meanesx
MeanesxLv4Meanesx

👍

Snorlax777
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I have read chinese novel with the same background and story with this novel. The difference is just the author change the name of the character in this novel into western name.

Siegfred
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Queen_Karina
Queen_KarinaLv13Queen_Karina

I love this, you could feel his emotions through the screen. Thanks for this amazing novel start, I look forward to the rest

Konan180
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I will be honest, I came for the tag of evil protagonist, for now I will continue waiting to see where the change of the MC is

El_Rasskull
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[img=recommend] Thanks for the chapter [img=recommend]

Infinitia
InfinitiaLv6Infinitia

LETS GET BROKEN

Tibbles
TibblesLv15Tibbles

Nice, I am very hopeful so far

PhantomNite629
PhantomNite629Lv15PhantomNite629

thx for the chap