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Phantasma_
Phantasma_Lv14Phantasma_

I'm really happy with this novel and the direction it's taken since the alter Ren reveal. It's really become it's own book, and one can see how I don't leave as comments as before in the early chapters. While I did really dial in and predict the whole plot twist with alter Ren, I have just been satisfied with this novel. All in all, it's a good situation. I am looking forward to the ending.

Zulu2018
Zulu2018Lv15Zulu2018

Melissa becoming an potion addict and Ren and his future father in law saying the cheesiest third rate lines ever yea nothing unusual

Logan_Nijhay
Logan_NijhayLv15Logan_Nijhay

I'm surprised the demons haven't caught on with all the cheesey one liners

Silvoid
SilvoidLv4Silvoid

Courting death are we? You better get on your knees or the young master will have your head!

BINAND_RAJ
BINAND_RAJLv3BINAND_RAJ

Rand0mizer
Rand0mizerLv15Rand0mizer

Thank you for the chapter!!!

Arkard
ArkardLv15Arkard

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola