Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV

Like that Ren is finally going villain mode but the Everblood and red book part felt like a unnecessary plot twist. How does he know about the book and why can he suddenly read it? Hopefully we get an explanation in future chapters.

That last bit with the antagonist reading the book seems like total BS. It's too out of nowhere given no one else could see it in the beginning. But he already knew what to look for as soon as he entered the room. What logic is that?...

Kinda random, but from all their interactions, why do I get the feeling that there was a conscious effort to prevent Emma from getting closer to Ren? NGL it makes me irritated TBH. I'm slowly getting the same feeling with Ava as well. It's like a feeling that these ships are being artificially blocked and it doesn't feel natural at all. Just my two cents. Carry on with the ships!

So the freaking demon can read the book?!?!

I hate this...ffffffffffffffffffff.

He's reading Kevin's red book correct? I thought other people couldn't see it? Am I missing something here?

Could it be that Ren from the first timeline made a contract with a Demon and that Demon is Everblood?

The book is like... revealing all about of ren. I wonder what this guy will do

I hate this development with a fiery passion. But I have already made my due with this novel. Good writing with forced plot developments and sometimes reads like a TNE. Sure, I'll allow it but frick this Everblood character to its untimely death. reee Now, take my golden ticket. You've lead me to read 340 chaps. So, you deserve it. 👏

At least Kevin begin to see Emma like more in this chap ^^

uhh one more factor that Ren can't put into his planning! Soon the escalation will start. thx again for 2x chapters!!

In the first place, it didnt not even make any sense how the book got to Kevin, but it was understandable. But later, we see the demon faceoff against what seem to be the demonkimg in the dream. Then, we found out the book story is from the viewpoint of Ren. In all of that, there was no foreshadowing or hints, they just popped out of nowhere making it feel unnatural and inconsistent. And what's with Everblood? He had too many opportunities to kill Ren but just teases him.

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anyone remember the part where Kevin has THAT dream it's kinda ominous also like a clue in the future chaps.....

oh great everblood is back

this is so staged. Why wouldn't he just store the book in his dimensional storage? But ig the plot has to move on somehow. Could've prob execute it better tho, Idk ill have to see

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